Eric's+narrative+writing

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 * A long time ago in England, there was a big cooking competition and every good cooks from every country came to England. Altogether, there were 26 cooks who entered to the competition. It was held in a big wide stadium. Two judges, who were a man and a woman, decided to name 26 cooks to cook A~Z. **** After the judges’ deciding who was going to be the finalists, cook B who was from Brazil and cook J who was from Japan became the finalists. They became famous in the world and they also became rivals. In cook B’s house, he was running out of food to make and so was cook J. Cook B decided to go to a big nice fresh-aired market and so did cook J. About six minutes later, cook B saw cook J's face in the market. Suddenly, cook B's face became red with anger because they were one of the worst rivals in the world and they wanted to hit each other really badly. ** **Cook J saw cook B's face too. As soon as cook J saw cook B's face, cook B started to throw some very huge pineapples to cook B as hard as a bazooka. Smash! One of those pineapples hit cook J's face and he laughed loudly at cook J. Cook J was so angry that he grabbed some very hot peppers and ate them to make him angrier and to throw things faster. Cook J's face and eyes became red. Then he started to throw some really gigantic watermelons to cook B as fast as a thunder. Crack! One of those watermelons hit cook B's face and cook J laughed loudly at cook B who was covered with a cracked watermelon with dizzy-looking face. There was a huge food fight. The market owner who was sleeping was woken by the noise and frightened.** **As soon as cook B and cook J saw market owner, who were coming to them with a metal bat in his hand and with angry face, they ran as fast as a mouse being chased by a cat with some food that they needed. The market owner exclaimed with sparks on his eyes, “You will have to pay for this after one of you wins the competition!!!". Cook B and cook J had to prepare a lot for the competition. The next day, the competition of the finalists began. Cook B made a beautifully-coloured pie and cook J made a wonderfully-decorated steak. The two judges in the competition couldn't decide who was going to be the best cook because the taste that they liked was different. Cook B and cook J had to have half a million dollar each which was the present for the winner. After the competition, both cook B and cook J had to give all of their money to the market owner because of that huge food fight. With that great money, the market owner became very rich but cook B and cook J became really poor. They decided to go back to their own country and study more about what food that men like and women like. Moral: we cannot decide which cook is the best because the taste we like is always different to others.**======

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